post #4: plans for revision

The first thing I plan to remedy with my project proposal is to expand on the research methods. Also, I plan to go more detail into my preliminary ideas for how to analyze data once it is collected. I also want to include the preliminary implications and limitations in my expansion on ideas.

I plan to revise the style to be more concise and direct. The feedback I got on this was helpful and included cutting down quotations rephrasing. Another aspect of style I plan to revise includes using transitions and synthesis verbs in key spots.

Lastly, I plan to revise the formatting to fit the genre and professional style.

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