post #4: plans for revision
The first thing I plan to remedy with my project proposal is to expand on the research methods. Also, I plan to go more detail into my preliminary ideas for how to analyze data once it is collected. I also want to include the preliminary implications and limitations in my expansion on ideas. I plan to revise the style to be more concise and direct. The feedback I got on this was helpful and included cutting down quotations rephrasing. Another aspect of style I plan to revise includes using transitions and synthesis verbs in key spots. Lastly, I plan to revise the formatting to fit the genre and professional style.